Hey Cassie! I just want to start out by commenting on your layout. I really like your background, it adds color without taking attention away from your stories themselves. I also love the font you picked. It really adds character with out too much going on. The background doesn't clash with the font either, you did a great job picking them out. The only thing I would suggest is adding a space between paragraphs in the Stone Cutter's Wife, like you did in the other stories, so that way it doesn't feel crowded. As for the stories themselves, you did a great job writing them. There's not any mistakes that I caught. I would say out of you three stories, my favorite would be The Fish-Peri. You described the fairy really well, I could picture her as I read your story. You did a great job, can't wait to read more!
Hey Cassie! I just want to start out by commenting on your layout. I really like your background, it adds color without taking attention away from your stories themselves. I also love the font you picked. It really adds character with out too much going on. The background doesn't clash with the font either, you did a great job picking them out. The only thing I would suggest is adding a space between paragraphs in the Stone Cutter's Wife, like you did in the other stories, so that way it doesn't feel crowded. As for the stories themselves, you did a great job writing them. There's not any mistakes that I caught. I would say out of you three stories, my favorite would be The Fish-Peri. You described the fairy really well, I could picture her as I read your story. You did a great job, can't wait to read more!
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