Thursday, December 1, 2016

Storytelling: The Three Roses

~I was dancing in a grand hall surrounded by people. My dress glimmered in the chandelier light and my hair was an intricate weaving of braids. I had never felt so stunning. I had just started to dance with the most handsome man, when I began to fall through the paper thin floor. It was the strangest thing. The floor simply began to crumble and down I went.~

I woke with a start. What a strange dream, I thought to myself. I looked out the window and saw that the sun had begun to rise. Mother will be leaving soon. I slipped out of bed and went downstairs to start breakfast so that she would have something to eat before she headed out. I always hated to see her go, but being a single mom didn't leave many options when it came to work. So, she had to travel a lot. My mother came downstairs and soon my two older sisters followed. 

"Good morning girls," she said. "Would you like me to bring you back anything from the trip?"

"I want a pearl necklace," said Priscilla. She was the oldest. 

"I want a sparkling broach," said Abigale. She was the second child.

"And what about you Mary? Do you want anything?" My mother asked me, the youngest.

"I have everything I could possibly need, but if you insist on bringing gifts I will accept three roses," I responded. 

Soon after my mother departed on her trip. This trip was supposed to shorter than many of her others. She estimated that she would be back by the next evening. So, for the rest of that day and the next I went on like I would any other day. Evening came and mother still had not arrived. I tried not to worry because sometimes she returned a little later than she anticipated, so I decided to wait until morning to panic. 

The next morning I awoke to the sound of my mother frantically calling my name. "Mary! Mary," she exclaimed. "I have had the most horrific night!"

She then went on to tell me the story of why she had been late returning home. It was quite unbelievable. She said that she had left late and didn't make it out of the woods before nightfall. So, she got lost and couldn't find her way out. However, she happened to stumble onto a beautiful castle with a splendid garden. So, she decided to pick me some roses. She had just plucked the third rose from the bush when she heard a low voice. She turned to see a basilisk standing behind her. She was terrified and explained that the roses were for me and that she was sorry for seemingly stealing them. The basilisk then demanded that she give me to it in exchange for the flowers or he would tear her to pieces. My mother, not knowing what else to do, agreed and quickly returned home. 

Her story was no doubt extravagant, but I would do anything for her and told her to take me to this basilisk. Once we arrived at the castle, I said goodbye to my mother and made my way inside. The basilisk quickly greeted me. "Now that you are here you must cook for me, clean my quarters, and help me bathe everyday. Then you must sing to me until I fall asleep." There was nothing else for me to do, so I agreed. I followed this routine for weeks, but after awhile it didn't feel so tedious. It was actually nice taking care of someone.

A month had gone by and I was starting to like the basilisk. One day he came in while I was cooking and told me to cut off his head with the sword that he held in his hand. I was horrified, for I had never done such a thing. He got angry and insisted that I comply with his wishes or he would inflict serious pain, so I did as I was told. 

No sooner had I unwillingly cut off his head, then a long serpent with the keys to the palace sprang forth. He asked me to cut off his head again and this time I didn't even hesitate. As soon as the blade came in contact with his neck he transformed into a handsome young prince. "This palace belongs to me," he said. "You have been kind to me this past month and I have grown quite fond of you. I would like to repay you for breaking my curse by taking your hand in marriage. If you will have me that is."

I was shocked, but I had already warmed up to him in basilisk form and seeing him as a human made those feelings turn into something more. It was easy to accept his proposal. So, we sent for my mother and sisters and had a huge wedding celebration. There was music and food and laughter and dancing. I ended the night dancing with the most handsome man in the ballroom, but this time I didn't fall through the floor. It wasn't a nightmare; it was a dream come true and we lived happily ever after. 

Author's note: My story is based off of The Three Roses from the Key of Gold by Josef Baudis. The original has the same plot line except for what the basilisk asks of Mary. In the original she is supposed to nurse him for three hours a day and she only does it for three days. I thought that this was a little strange, so I changed the task required of her to something less uncomfortable. I also extended the time frame because I wanted to give her the chance to get to know the basilisk, so that when he asked her to marry him at the end there would already be some type of feelings there. It wouldn't just be an obligatory proposal. I also began my story with the ending line of the original. I did this because it felt out of place at the end, in my opinion. It was very dream like, so I wanted to build off of that. I chose the names Priscilla and Abigale because they sound a little "snotty" and based off of what they ask for, they kind of give off that vibe. I kept Mary's name the same to stick to the original story. I also chose to tell it from her perspective because I thought it gave the story a little more complexity. I chose the first image to help give an idea of what Mary was dreaming about. I chose the second image to show the beauty of the roses in the garden. I chose the third image because it was the human form of the Beast (Prince Adam) from Beauty and the Beast and because I love the detail. 

Bibliography: The Key of Gold by Josef Baudis; Mythfolklore Untextbook

Image 1: Ballroom from team-eta.blogspot.com; found on Pinterest
Image 2: Three Roses by Steve Lohmueller; Steve Lohmueller Photography
Image 3: Prince Adam/ Beast by Jirka Väätäinen; "Real Life" Disney Characters



Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Reading Notes: Czech Folktales Part B

Nine at a Blow was a good read. It kept me interested the whole time and completely caught me by surprise at the end. Sneaky little tailor! I don't know what I would do with this story but it is one of my favorites this unit.

A Clever Lass was awesome! I'd love to make this a modern story about a couple getting into an argument. I think it would be fun to switch the roles, like have the male take the female with him. I think there is a lot of potential here.

Image Info: farm girl by fourswords

Bibliography: The Key of Gold by Josef Baudis; Mythfolkore Untextbook

Tuesday, November 29, 2016

Reading Notes: Czech Folktales Part A



I like the story of Silly Jura. I love underdog stories almost as much as I like fairy tales. There is just something about watching someone, who is expected to fail, succeed. If I adapted this story I would probably elaborate on the time spent with the cat/lady more. I would want to go deeper into their relationship than just the mere surface the original provides.

The Bear, the Eagle, and the Fish was an interesting story. I like the use of animals in the stories I have read this semester. After reading so many, you'd think I would be used to enchanted twists, but I was still a bit surprised. I think it would be interesting to tell the story from either the perspective of one of the daughters or of the brother.

Kojata reminded me of a few different stories that I read this semester. Having to pick her out of a line up and turning into different objects were both plots of different stories I have previously read. i don't know what I would do with this story, I just thought that was super cool!

The Three Roses was kind of disappointing. I love Beauty and the Beast so I was really looking forward to this one. It was just bizarre. I liked that it was a single mother instead of a father because you don't see that very often. However, it was very scarce on details and felt like it was being hurried along. Plus the ending was really out of place in my opinion. I think it would be interesting to adapt this story into a dream because the last line reminded me of something dream like.


Bibliography: The Key of Gold by Josef Baudis; Mythfolklore Untextbook

Image 1: My Dream of You by Filmchild; Pinterest
Image 2: Three Roses by Steve Lohmueller; Steve Lohmueller Photography

Monday, November 28, 2016

Portfolio Index

The Three Lovers: A modern-day love story of a girl who must choose between three stand-up guys, the toll the decision takes on her, and the way she is able to come to a decision.

The Fish-Peri: A tale of a fairy whose longing for a less lonely life leads her on a journey to finding true love and the obstacles she and her love must face to ensure their happily ever after.

The Stonecutter's Wife: A story of a woman who becomes dissatisfied with her life and wishes for more. However, in searching for happiness in material objects, she finds that she has lost touch with the source of her true happiness and longs for it to be restored. Will she get her wish?

The Fairy Bride: A tale of a young Indian Princess who has always wanted to live a magical life. However, her mother had other plans. With an impending arranged marriage, will Neen-i-zu give up on her dream? Or will she get her happily ever after?

Briar Rose: A bedtime story about a sleeping girl, her kingdom, and the brave boy who was able to wake her up. He broke the spell and the two fell in love. This story couldn't possibly get any better, or could it?

~~~I had a blast recreating these stories and putting them into a portfolio. I was thrilled to be able to keep the theme of love throughout each of my stories and am so happy with how they turned out. I love each of these stories, but my favorite of this bunch is probably Briar Rose. It's just so endearing and I loved that I was able to end my portfolio with a bedtime story. I thought it was the perfect way to wrap it up. I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them!~~~

Thursday, November 17, 2016

Storytelling: Briar Rose

"Daddy, will you tell us the story again? Please?!" The two little brown-haired, green-eyed girls squealed as they clambered into bed.

"OK, I'll tell you the story. Settle down now," Prince Phillip chuckled as he tucked the giggling princesses into bed. "Here we go....."

~Once upon a time there lived a king and queen who ruled a land where fairies still resided. They had plenty of material things, but they had been married many years and were still childless. This made them very sad.

One day the queen was walking in her garden next to the river when she saw a poor fish that had thrown itself out of the water. The queen felt sorry for the fish and threw it back into the water. The fish was grateful to the kind queen and told her that soon her wish to have a child would be fulfilled.

The fish's promise soon came true and the queen gave birth to a beautiful daughter named Briar Rose. The king was so filled with joy that he decided to hold a magnificent feast to celebrate. He invited all of the citizens of his land.

The queen decided to invite the fairies as well. There were thirteen fairies in their kingdom, but they only had enough room for twelve. So, they had to leave out one of the fairies. The twelve fairies that were invited came to the joyful event and took turns blessing Briar Rose with lovely gifts. One gave her a kind heart, one gave her beauty, and so on until she had everything good in the world.

The eleventh fairy had just finished blessing Briar Rose, when a noise echoed through the ballroom. Whispers quickly started to spread that the thirteenth fairy had arrived. She was not pleasant like the other fairies. She entered the ballroom and scolded the king and queen for not inviting her. She was so mad that she cursed the child to die from a wound inflicted by a spinning wheel on her fifteenth birthday.

The king and queen were heartbroken. The twelfth fairy had not blessed Briar Rose yet and told them that even though the curse had to be fulfilled, she could soften the consequences to a deep slumber of one hundred years instead of death. So, this was the gift she gave to Briar Rose.

The king and queen still hoped they could avoid the curse and ordered that all of the spinning wheels in the kingdom be rounded up and burned. In the meantime, the princess grew up and all of the other gifts were fulfilled. She was so beautiful and kind-hearted and everyone who knew her loved her dearly.

On her fifteenth birthday, her parents were away and she was left alone in the palace. She went exploring and found an old tower with an old door that had a small golden key in the knob. She slowly turned the key and gently pushed the door open. In the middle of the room sat a spinning wheel. She had never seen one before and set to inspecting the strange object. Briar Rose ran her finger across the spindle and pricked her finger. The curse was fulfilled and she fell lifeless to the floor.

~"Oh no!" the girls cried.

"Don't worry," Phillip reassured them. "She's just asleep, remember?"

"Oh yeah!" they said simultaneously. "Keep going, Daddy!"

"Alright," he continued.

~Briar Rose was not the only one who fell asleep. Her entire kingdom had fallen under the spell, including her parents who had arrived home just as the curse was taking place. While the kingdom fell into the deep slumber, a thick hedge of thorns grew around the palace. Every year it grew taller and thicker until the palace was completely hidden from view. However, word spread throughout the lands of the beautiful princess and her sleeping kingdom. Every so often a king's son would try to make his way through the hedge to the palace, but they always got stuck in the thorns and never made it out.

Many years later, a young prince came into the land and an old man told him the story of Briar Rose and the palace hidden amidst the thorns. The man also told the prince of the countless princes who tried in vain to seek her out. This did not frighten the prince. So he set out to try his luck despite the old man's objections.

It just so happened that it had been exactly one hundred years since the curse fell and so when the prince came to the hedge all he saw were beautiful flowering shrubs, which he easily made his way through. Then he made his way to the palace. He entered the palace and saw the sleeping court.
He continued on until he finally reached the tower. He pushed open the door and saw Briar Rose fast asleep on the floor. He was so enchanted by her beauty that he stooped down and gently kissed her.

As soon as the prince kissed her, she opened her eyes and smiled at him. They made their way down from the tower to find the rest of the kingdom waking up as well. The two wed soon after and they lived happily ever after.

~"The end," said Phillip. "Goodnight, girls, I love you."

"Goodnight, Daddy," the little princesses said.

Phillip put out the light and gently shut the girls' door. He made his way to his room where his wife was waiting.

"The same story again, huh?" she asked.

"Yeah, but I never get tired of it. I could tell the story of us a thousand times," Phillip replied.

Briar Rose smiled at him and he smiled at her. They knew the ending to the story was true, they were definitely living happily ever after.

Author's Note: My story is very similar to the original story of Briar Rose. The plot is exactly the same, but retold in my own words. I wanted to keep the original intact, but add a new flare to it. I thought it would be cute to have it being told as a bedtime story. I thought it would be fun to have the prince from the story being the one retelling the story and it made it even sweeter that he was telling it to his daughters. I liked the idea that Briar Rose and Phillip went on to have children and they loved each other so much that they shared their enchanting story with their eager daughters. The girls having such a strong interest in the story makes it even sweeter because they love listening to how their parents met and the fascinating circumstances that led to their encounter. It was a challenge trying to figure out how to flip back and forth between the dialogue of Phillip and the girls and the actual story itself. I wanted to make it clear without having to add a lot to the story. I named the prince Phillip because that was the prince's name from Disney's Sleeping Beauty which is very similar to the story of Briar Rose. The story still has the fairy tale theme of love, it is just much more subtle.

Image Information: "Take the Fair Face of Woman, and Gently Suspending, With Butterflies, Flowers, and Jewels Attending, Thus Your Fairy is Made of Most Beautiful Things" by Sophie Gengembre Anderson (Wikimedia Commons)
-Photo of a Schacht Reeves spinning wheel crafted by the Reeves Family taken from http://heritagespinning.com/wheels/
-"The Council Chamber" from the "Legend of Briar Rose" by Sir Edward Burne-Jones (Wikimedia Commons)

Bibliography: Fairy Tales by the Brothers Grimm; Mythology and Folklore Untextbook

Wednesday, November 16, 2016

Reading Notes: Brothers Grimm (LibriVox) Part B

From a Children's Story by Sybil Shearin



I really liked the story of the Queen Bee. I hadn't ever read it before, but I liked that the underdog was the one who ended up saving the day. The other two brothers still got to live seemingly happy lives after, but the younger one got a better deal and all because he was kind and considerate. I don't know how I would adapt it, but I really enjoyed reading it!

The Twelve Huntsman was a good read. I think this would be fun to make into a modern tale. A story about unrelenting love. I like that she went to be near him, but didn't do anything rash or out of character despite her broken heart. In the end their love won out and that was all that mattered.

Jordina and Jorindel would be a fun story to turn into a story resembling a modern day kidnapping. It would be kind of dark, but the original story sets it up nicely.

Bibliography: Fairy Tales by the Brothers Grimm; Mythology and Folklore UntextbookThe

Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Reading Notes: Brothers Grimm (LibriVox) part A

I love the story of The Frog Prince. It has been awhile since I read it. It bothered me a little that the Princess was seemingly mean to the frog and did what she did unwillingly and yet he still wanted to love her and marry her. I think it would be interesting to make the Princess and the Frog build a relationship first and then have her say she loves him and that is what breaks the curse. It seems a little to easy for the Princess to reluctantly put the frog up and then get an awesome reward.

Rapunzel is probably one of my favorite stories. I love that even though she and the prince go through so many obstacles, they still are able to be together in the end. I think it would be fun to make this a modern day story. I haven't quite figured out what details I would use, but the thought intrigues me.

Clever Elsie was definitely an interesting read. She sounds more crazy than clever to me! Ha, but I did find pity on her when her husband tricked her. I don't know how I could adapt this, but it definitely caught my attention.

I think it would be interesting to make a sequel to Briar Rose. It would be fun to see how the Prince helped her and her court adapt to the new world. I mean 100 years have gone by surely things have changed. It would also be fun to tell the story from the Prince's perspective, perhaps as a bed time story to his children.




Bibliography: Fairy Tales by the Brothers Grimm; Mythology and Folklore Untextbook
Image information: Image 1= The Frog Prince by Paul Friedrich Meyerheim (Wikipedia)
Image 2= The Rose Bower from the "Legend of Briar Rose" series by Sir Edward Burne-Jones (Wikimedia Commons)